Ahhhhh! I can let out the breath I've been holding. I've only gotten to read through this once, because unlike most of my office, I actually have work to do.
But so far, so good. I really, really (evilly) love seeing Dom so off kilter and to see how and where he goes to regain control not only of himself, but of the situation...like this little rushed encounter might possibly get it out of his system.
Plus it's lovely (also evilly) to watch Brian slide into deep shades of gray about what he's doing and why...just overall, a great approach, a great build and break for tension.
There's just something about Brian, what Dom notices, the blank slatiness of him, like he's not fully formed and Dom not seeing how he's doing some of the shaping...
I'm sure I'll have more when I've really had time to read it slowly, tack it onto my disk copy (Because I keep starting over from the beginning to see where point "A" intersects point "B" and just...
This is really stellar (no pun intended) and as someone who really is not participating in any of the seasonal challenges, I'm ever so glad you posted this for those of us who aren't going to get swamped and buried with the tons of stuff getting ready to hit the fan community. This one's just for us.
(also, at Escapade, I owe you a drink for the lovely fic and then a whap on the head for the disinterest comment,..cause you know, when I think about you and your fic, I don't think disinterest is one of the words that comest to mind. Nope, not at all. [g])
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But so far, so good. I really, really (evilly) love seeing Dom so off kilter and to see how and where he goes to regain control not only of himself, but of the situation...like this little rushed encounter might possibly get it out of his system.
Plus it's lovely (also evilly) to watch Brian slide into deep shades of gray about what he's doing and why...just overall, a great approach, a great build and break for tension.
There's just something about Brian, what Dom notices, the blank slatiness of him, like he's not fully formed and Dom not seeing how he's doing some of the shaping...
I'm sure I'll have more when I've really had time to read it slowly, tack it onto my disk copy (Because I keep starting over from the beginning to see where point
"A" intersects point "B" and just...
This is really stellar (no pun intended) and as someone who really is not participating in any of the seasonal challenges, I'm ever so glad you posted this for those of us who aren't going to get swamped and buried with the tons of stuff getting ready to hit the fan community. This one's just for us.
(also, at Escapade, I owe you a drink for the lovely fic and then a whap on the head for the disinterest comment,..cause you know, when I think about you and your fic, I don't think disinterest is one of the words that comest to mind. Nope, not at all. [g])