EVERY single book I've edited for them lately has the most artificial conflict. It's so tacked on, just to have that third act blowup and reconciliation. It's a formula I wish would die, because when it's just tacked on like this, forced, it's almost hilarious, and this book was by far one of the worst I've had.

And thank you so much for your help--you are so incredibly kind to me. ♥ ♥