somniloquence

The really funny thing is I was looking through some of the reviews of the previous book (this was a second in a series), which I hadn't worked on, and there were some complaints about how there was a lot of buildup that there'd be a love scene but no real sex scenes, it was kind of a tease and a little too tame, and then these other complaints about how they were looking for a clean romance and then they got hit with sex talk. Hilarious. I could tell that the author was trying to amp up the sexual aspects but was very clearly uncomfortable with it--they were super awkward and badly paced.