Car p0rn

[gwyn]

I've posted the Fast and the Furious story at my web site. Testing Gravity is here, it's about 10,000 words, Dom/Brian slash, and lamely porny (for me, anyway). Thanks so much to X for sending me the gorgeous, gorgeous drawings; they were definitely an inspiration.

And not that anyone cares, but I've also added the Miami Vice slash story I had only posted here last fall, now in a convenient single serving and more easily accessible for my LJ-phobic friends. (Crockett/Castillo, about 4,000 words, not teerifically smutty.)

Please don't take my slash card away from me just yet. ;-)

Comments

[mlyn.livejournal.com]

Kick ass! I like the additions you made.

[tiashome.livejournal.com]

Please don't take my slash card away from me just yet. ;-)
Hee:-) No way, not after lines like these:

Dom rolled over with the sheet twisting around his hip, the line of the external oblique emphasized in the movement, and Brian placed his hand proprietarily on those magnificent abs, smiling.
and
Just the touch of Brian's hands across Dom's head would send a shiver down his spine, or the challenging way he'd glance at Dom with eyes that told him to do whatever he wanted.

Mmmm, I love the way you describe Brian touching Dom. And I love when antagonists eventually fall for each other. Lots of angsty goodness. Great job with these two -- thanks for this!

Valentine Heart was heartbreakingly lovely, btw. Perfect song and clip choices. The red color theme (the book wrapping!) throughout was wonderful. It looked good on my Norcent DVD player with just some minor pixelation close to transitions.

[gwyn-r.livejournal.com]

That's really good to know, about the vid -- it sounds like you're getting the benefit of the slightly better bit rate, but it's still doing the pixelization. I guess that's as good as I can hope for. I've updated my dvd software but I don't think it'll help any, so I'm stuck with it. ;-)

[movies-michelle.livejournal.com]

Oooh, car sex. That was hot! And the ending was one of my favorite kinds. So glad you got it done and posted it!

[mackiemesser.livejournal.com]

I'd say your slash card is in no danger.

Very nice; there's a lovely dreamy, languid feel to it (at least, for me--it reminds of some days I spent on the beach in Puerto Penasco).

And this bit is my favorite--very lyrical:

But months went past, and life felt like an endless drowning. Brian went south, pulled down by the gravity that Mia had spoken of once, the pull that always seemed to bring people to Dominic Toretto.

[gwyn-r.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you. It had a bumpy road, so this is really nice to hear. I always feel like settings make the story, really -- to me they're part of the characterization, so this is a cool thing to hear.

[namastenancy.livejournal.com]

Moma don't take my slash card away! LOL! No danger, Gwyn dear. You are the queen of Seattle slashers and I wish that I'd know about Miami Vice slash when I was such an avid fan. Castillo/Crockett - makes perfect sense to me. That was the only role where I've lusted after Edward Olmos. The horrible teeth and acne scars just added to his strange alure. And normally I don't go for the blonde buttercream types but I'd make an exception for Crockett.
Ah, for the days of Friday night excitement when I could hardly wait for 9 PM when the theme would come on and all those gorgeous colors would flood my TV screen.
Thanks for bringing back the memories.

namaste nancy

[gwyn-r.livejournal.com]

Castillo just radiates sex, to me -- the dorky way he dresses and yet comes across as this super cool guy with his stony silences, the way he can kill people with one hand in his pocket and the other on their neck, the way he's so damaged and inward and messed up... yummy. There was something that he and Don Johnson seemed to bring out in each other that elevated everything. I just wish I knew how to write crime stories -- I'd really like to write more of them, but I want to have a plot, and I just don't do crime well. Westerns, spy stuff, supernatural... easy peasy, but regular old garden variety street crime... I suck!