Vid beta?

Would anyone be willing to look at a vid for me, very quickly (I need to get this to VVC as soon as I can and not drag my extension out)? It's for Peggy Carter (Agent Carter, the Marvel one-shot, and Captain America: The First Avenger). You don't have to be super vid fluent, I'm just mostly looking for reactions, whether there's anything jarring or that doesn't work, any issues that might come up. I have a doctor appt. in an hour, but when I get back home this afternoon I can make a copy of the draft and upload it to sendspace by this evening.

ETA: Thanks, I have sufficient responses! You guys are awesome!